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"Worthless being, you don't deserve anybody's affection."
"...I already know."


He was holding his heavy head
Full of shame and lies instead
Tears wanted to flee but were stuck
His body motionless as a trunk


"You hurt her terribly this time, you silly moron."
"...Oh shut your mouth."
"She was kind and blind enough to love you, and yet..."


Slowly realizing what he has done
This petty mind was torn
From any sane mental state he flew
Painfully raising the head anew


"...You're pissing me off."
"And yet, you screwed everything she has brought you."
"...Stop talking, you piece of trash."


The gaze abnormally empty
Darkness surrounding him as a krone
World has become hostile so quickly
In his dreary room, alone




"...I should really stop talking to myself."
Life is full of surprises, you were one of them.
I'm not sure I deserve anybody.
(Enjoy btw)
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OrientalArc Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
great..
you have words to express your world..
And ends are always.. surprising..
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WhitePlumFragrance Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like surprising ends. :meow:
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SoggyPizza Sep 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gotta love what's relatable
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:icontonguesofmenorangels:
I really like the use of italics! I love that last line too, and the imagery is wonderful. Brilliant :)
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WhitePlumFragrance Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot! That's right, italic is an interesting tool, it allows to add a little "effect" to the words. :D
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:icontonguesofmenorangels:
You're welcome :) I've experimented with italics and the effect they add. Difficult to get them right, I find, but you've got it perfect here I think!
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WhitePlumFragrance Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. :meow:
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:icontonguesofmenorangels:
you're welcome :)
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jojo22 Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How could someone as lovely as you not deserve anyone?

But yeah, I've felt like that myself sometimes Huggle!
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WhitePlumFragrance Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're the lovely one here! :hug: :D
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