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I unfairly gave you,
Many wonders this world doesn't own
Many pipe dreams I painted for you
The rainbow butterfly of my love
Gentle treasures buried in my very soul
The phial of my affection...

...That you drank in one go
Drying me to my last heartbeat.
You gave me ashes back
Sealed in a mocking funeral urn.
Even bullets couldn't wound me 
As much as your sadistic smile.

Despite leaving me all alone, again
I still forgive you. I still believe in you.

On the gloomy road
And I walk, and I cry, and I feel
A chill of loneliness.
I gave you so much, and you gave me nothing back. 
I foolishly think you might give me something, one day. 

Why do I keep trusting you? Because I'm alone, and you're my only "friend".


EDIT : Wow, I just woke up and saw this Daily Deviation sign. I'm a bit speechless at the moment so I just want to thank my dear and badass friend G--Unit for suggesting it and having faith in me, and thank the amazing GrimFace242 for his fantastic job and commitment on the website (and also for featuring my poem :giggle:).  
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Given 2014-07-06
What I gave you by WhitePlumFragrance is an intricately woven poem about heartache. ( Suggested by G--Unit and Featured by GrimFace242 )
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
The poem is very sad, but the unit has become fashion of the times.
Thank you.
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you my friend. :heart:
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
welcom
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Writer
I'm so happy for you! And as always I'm speechless by your ability to weave a story with your poems. :) 
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks dear! This one is kinda short and straight to the point but at least I hope it's effective. :D
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Writer
It's definitely straight to the point compared to your other poems, but I think it makes sense since the material of the poem itself is so sharply painful if that makes sense. 
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, everyone can easily relate to it. 
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AuthorKatieOlson Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student Writer
Agreed, it's very relatble. :nod: 
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lampaya Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This Is Absolutely Beautiful. it's Clean And Flows Along Very Nicely.



Great Job, Dearie~
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a million sweetie. :heart:
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