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Tu n'as jamais existé.
J'ai passé mes jours à t'attendre, en vain
Mes nuits à t'imaginer à mes côtés, 
À imprégner mon âme de ta présence...
Seul comme la lune, je lui murmure chaque soir :
"Elle n'existe pas."

Mon corps lourdement chargé de solitude,
Bientôt ! La mort va s'écouler dans mes veines
Les ténèbres me guettent, obstruent mes sens...
Et ta silhouette s'éloigne.
Une vie trop courte menée au rythme de mes illusions
J'ose penser que ça en valait la peine
Même si tu n'existais pas.

Je ne peux pas me rappeler ton nom
Je ne l'ai jamais su
Pourtant,
J'ai tant de souvenirs de nous. 
Et de ta silhouette qui s'évapore,
Une brume de chagrin.

Une nuit étoilée, 
Pleine d'espoirs envolés.
Pourquoi n'as-tu pas existé ?




You had to exist


You never existed.
I spent my days waiting for you, in vain
My nights imagining you by my side,
Pervading my soul of your presence...
As alone as the moon, I whisper to it every single evening:
"She doesn't exist." 

My body heavily loaded of loneliness,
Soon! Death will flow in my veins
Darkness lurking me, obstructing my senses...
And your silhouette flies away.
A life too short lived at the rhythm of my illusions
I dare say that it was worth it
Even if you did not exist.

I can not remember your name
I never knew it
Yet,
I have so many memories of us.
And your silhouette evaporates,
A haze of grief.

A starry night,
Full of dashed hopes.
Why didn't you exist?
Un homme sur le point de mourir, et qui a passé toute sa vie à s'imaginer, à rêver d'une femme qui n'a jamais existé. 
Une version très évoluée de l'un de mes premiers textes.

A man about to die, who spent his whole life dreaming of a wife who never existed.
An enhanced version of one of my first texts.
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Lethe--Styx Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
Très joli poème, proche de la recherche de l'âme sœur, question qui s'invite un jour en chacun d'entre nous...

J'imagine en vous lisant, une belle nous loin de cet homme...soufflant les mêmes regrets sur les cierges de son existante...

Elle existait si fort et si vrai en son cœur...en son âme...qu'assurément ils se rencontreront...en d'autres lieux d'un autre temps...

Notre énergie en éternelle...

C'est très beau WhitePlumFragance... :rose: :clap:
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Quel beau commentaire, ça fait vraiment plaisir de lire vos retours sur mes modestes écrits. Merci beaucoup. :heart:
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AnemyaPhotoCreations Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Professional Artisan Crafter
Dur mais beau ! :thumbsup: :)
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Merci bien! :blush:
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Braxton-T-Rutledge Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I can't help but think there is always something essential lost in any translation. The idea, the image, of a person living, dying, with an imaginary lover is tragic, but more because they likely never let themselves leave their minds to look around them. They die lovesick and alone because they chose to, and they can't even see that. This idea has a lot of potential

I loathe to say more, because I cannot read French and cannot speak to the quality of writing in your native tongue.
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed, translation is a very tricky exercise because you need to keep the "essence" and the message of the original version.
You're right, this man couldn't look around him and that's also what led him to his loss. 
Thank you for this constructive comment. :)
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Braxton-T-Rutledge Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I'm not sure how constructive it was. You are welcome
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Emofingers Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Writer
This is astonishingly beautiful. I could almost see all of your words forming images in my head and I could feel the emotions go through me! Amazing work. Brilliant! 
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow you made my day my dear! I'm glad you felt the meaning behind my words. :D :love:
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lacesnflowers Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is incredible!
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