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        - A Beauty of sins
She drives men into blind abysses,
These rats run across the maze of expectation
And try to climb this perfumed Babel Tower.
Their Ragnarök is already lost ;
She, whose radiance is no myth,
Stands far upon the human world.


        - The Shepherdess
They took themselves as four-leaf clovers
Gifted her of millions of edelweiss bouquets.
Yet they meant nothing to her, less than cattle,
Yet lost in masses of brainless sheeps
Led by the baton of her tuneful voice,
Such a sweet slow lobotomy!
Disillusioned tears are falling... Petty humans
Stuck forever in the Spider Queen's net.


        - Divine Valkyrie
An acid rain for their stupid dried humanity,
Cursed fools sent themselves to the gallows
Sold friends and family to the Elysium,
Even betrayed their own Gods and beliefs
Willing to be part of a new Valhalla,
Just for her.

All she had to do was smile. 
She drives every men around crazy. She's even beyond beautiful. A Goddess, a Valkyrie, unforgettable and omnipotent.

Read carefully. As usual, no word is put at random. 



Background music (8:05) : www.youtube.com/watch?v=2UiZ_W…
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice~ :)
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Fainks! Heart Love 
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure~ :)
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wallawallaw Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
she's a maneater... that was my first thought as i started to read it (maybe giving too much stress or weight on the valkyrie in the title)

i love this poem... but i have to admit, i have my problem with the representation of the babel tower they are trying to climb...

congratulations, magnificent...
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
She's indeed a maneater, and takes advantage of it. :p
What is your problem with it? :o

Thanksfor your support btw!
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wallawallaw Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
i always the the tower of babel as something linguistic... and i try to filter this out now... trying to find another image more fitting here...

it is my pleasure, and your art is worthwhile supporting... it's fantastic
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You made my day once again. :blush:
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wallawallaw Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
thank you, i am glad to be of any help :nod:
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StevenGilby Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Writer
I think "perfumed Babel Tower" reads a little weird. Other than that, I looooved it! Best part was:
Yet lost in masses of brainless sheeps
Led by the baton of her tuneful voice,
Such a sweet slow lobotomy!
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww I hope this text doesn't ring any bell to you my dear Steven!
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