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Tan squirrels hunt nuts before purple dawn.
Violin notes whistle through dried branches,
Puddles - eager redbreasts moisten their throat.
Vast painting of the poet's dreams!


I hear; siren's melody baits lost souls from the wood,
The misty air is loaded by scents of dews,
Tremendous land of dead leaves, out of sight! Swimming peacefully,
White waterlily feels the dragonfly scratching its back.


Trees' woody eyes are pointing at the sapphire surface,
I stare at polychromatic clouds, leaving the heavenly throne.
And from her very breath, she blows them off. Lady of the Lake.


Condescending Nature! Your cruelty is matched your greatness.
Natural, hazy shivers flow through my bloodstream,
There, there she looked at me! Lady of the Lake!
Lena version 2.0
Back to basics.
I've never been that serious about trying to create a decent piece of writing.
I hope you'll enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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AsakoBunny Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you described every detail! Beautiful!
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WhitePlumFragrance Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot, I put my heart into writing this. :D
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AsakoBunny Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can most certainly tell.
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SolidMars Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

hello lovely, featured here: Weekly Feature
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WhitePlumFragrance Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks again. :)
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SolidMars Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :huggle:
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shep4life Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Trees' woody eyes are pointing at the sapphire surface,
I stare at polychromatic clouds, leaving the heavenly throne.
And from her very breath, she blows them off. Lady of the Lake.

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WhitePlumFragrance Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot for the feeback mate, and thanks for the fav! :D
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shep4life Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate when people give me feedback so I do the same :)
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Adonael Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You emote nature well and I just liked the specific details - dragonflies scratching their backs, so on, so forth :)
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