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The whispering wind drops off memories on the road
        Smells of winter.

Foggy trees, hidden flowers, fleeting scenery, everything blurs
        The maze of my brain.

Shivering as if I was drunk with grief
        Depressive liquor.

Human wreck stares at me, hollow gaze
        A mirror.

My past lives are hung on the wall of oblivion
        Reborn from grief.

Eternal darkness reign above me, on this oppressive night
        Snows of coal.

The image of your grave stuck in my head
        As dead as you.
Inspired by a great Romanian talent.
A text about a loss. I really felt this one, though I can't explain why.
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checkyeschloe 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Love it truly a sorrowful poem. Made me remember the ones i lost and loved. :clap: once again you leave me breathless. :heart:
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WhitePlumFragrance 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Please breathe! :o :heart:
Thank you so much. 
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checkyeschloe 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :)
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19andMugsy Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
love your title, such shocking heart pounding words,
interesting read, each verse captures my minds eye  
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WhitePlumFragrance Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, that's a very beautiful comment. :)
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19andMugsy Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very welcome, you are :) 
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Scream0kinzMonstaKid Apr 3, 2014  Student General Artist
WOW!!! Amazing!!! 
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WhitePlumFragrance Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Thanks. :D 
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Scream0kinzMonstaKid Apr 3, 2014  Student General Artist
Yeah!!! Really!!! :D
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photographic-pupils Feb 18, 2014  Student Writer
Great poem. Definitely feel the overwhelming sense of loss.
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