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Light through the branches
Greenish flower scents arise!
Blind man sees anew

De la lumière à travers les branches
Des senteurs verdâtres de fleur émergent !
L'aveugle voit à nouveau


Lost kids in the woods
The human-faced tree stares,
Hidden in the dark

Enfants perdus dans les bois
L'arbre à visage humain observe,
Caché dans l'obscurité




Vegetables grow -
Among the desolation
Such foodie colours!

Des légumes poussent -
Parmi la désolation
Tant de couleurs gourmandes !


Haikus again! With their French translation.
5-7-5 metric rules applies here to the English version only. :) (Smile)

You'll sometimes see "-" in a haiku, many translators agree that "-" means wonder, or a deep emotion.

Enjoy these pieces of life. :) (Smile)

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:icontommyboywood:
tommyboywood 1 day ago  Professional Writer
sweet!
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WhitePlumFragrance 1 day ago  Hobbyist Writer
Eheh thanks again dear. :)
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LauraMel Feb 25, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Très beaux! La métrique des Haikus est parfaite en Anglais, mais je préfère la version en Français... je la trouve plus douce et poétique. Tu es vraiment talentueuse!!!
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:iconwhiteplumfragrance:
WhitePlumFragrance Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow grazie mille! :D je suis vraiment contente qu'ils t'aient autant plu ! :la:
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:iconlauramel:
LauraMel Feb 25, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:-)
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ZeClare Feb 7, 2014   Digital Artist
blind man sees anew.... ;)
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:iconwhiteplumfragrance:
WhitePlumFragrance Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Jun Nagase (Smile) [V1] 
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:iconzeclare:
ZeClare Feb 7, 2014   Digital Artist
>meant to be :)
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Miss-Tbones Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Ohh this is just lovely! Great visual to the words! It flows!:clap::wow:
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WhitePlumFragrance Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks a lot! :D :heart:
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