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Haven't heard from you in months
Our love used to give us goosebumps
Now it's like this, being together was my only wish
Now we just reminisce, on what we could've had
This makes me so sad, because the goods become the bad


Go away and never stay in my way
This silly game you used to play
Controlling the strings of my feelings
Bloody puppeteer of your smiles...
I won't look back and just go away



Each day has it's own way of showing us a better day
Which is the best way to live without you today?
I can't get you out of my head no matter what 
So all I do is jot, these rhymes that I have in my head
Sometimes I wish I was dead, but instead I just go ta bed


And I cry, cry, under the moonlight's cruelty
And they bleed, bleed, mutilated limbs
And they laugh, laugh, my elderly demons
I wish I could have suffered differently...
Now I'm just another wreck in the sea of griefs



All I wanna do is laugh with you
But anytime we talk it turns into a passed issue
So I guess there's only one thing left, let's get this off our chest
We gotta go our separate ways, no better way to phrase
This madness has to stop, it's like our love's begin to rot


Desire within, a part of me missing
Your resonant laughs are haunting...
Will you ever cherish me again? 
Endless days, swarming crows, deep black dawn
I just want you back
Here is my first collaboration with the awesome :icong--unit: And my first song as well.
Check his stuff out, he's done some awesome parodies and he's a very friendly guy.
This song is basically about the different emotions you may feel after a break-up. From a masculine and feminine point of view. :)
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amrgalal7 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
One of the best songs I've encountered in a long time :love:
Very emotional :heart:
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks mate! I wish G--Unit and I could record our voices together. :laughing:
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amrgalal7 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THAT WOULD BE AWESOME..really, go for it :eager:
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Sopecartoons Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Powerful lyrics!
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I think G--Unit and I are making a pretty decent team. :p 
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Sopecartoons Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
An excellent combination!
Thank you for a great song ... loved it!
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IzeBerg92 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Well done^^ Very nicely written, I can totally relate to it Clap 
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! And congrat to our dear G--Unit !
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OrientalArc Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Immense sense of feelings for the moment conveyed dramatically and beautifully….!!
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you my dear Hasan!
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